Paper Revision: Please see professor comments:
The baseline information you collated is very clear. Use this information and develop a rich discussion that explores the integration of these elements through analysis. Your source materials are not well suited for this assessment. The homogenized and generalized content of a textbook is not best suited for the level of detail and insight necessary for this assessment. Please review the materials on the course page Use these or similar resources in your work.
You also have writing issues that should be addressed.
To advance both of these areas, work with the writing center. In both of these areas, thy have expert resources available for your support.
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Dr B
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DESCRIBES METHODS OF CAPITAL AND INVESTMENTS USED BY HEALTH CARE SYSTEMS.
FACULTY COMMENTS:“
DEVELOP DETAILED INFORMATION ABOUT EACH OF THE APPROACHES. USING THIS DETAIL CONSTRUCT AN ANALYSIS THAT PROVIDES BOTH A SYNTHESIS OF THE INFORMATION AND EXPLORES THEIR EFFICACY.
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EXPLAINS HOW ACCESS TO CAPITAL IMPACTS THE DECISIONS OF A HEALTH CARE SYSTEM.
FACULTY COMMENTS:“
DRAW UPON THE DETAILED RESEARCH TO ANALYZE THE IMPACT OF ACCESS TO CAPITAL ON DECISION MAKING. USE SCHOLARLY AND PROFESSIONAL LITERATURE. CONTENT FROM TEXTBOOKS IS NOT SUITABLE FOR THIS ASSESSMENT.
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WRITES WITH SUFFICIENT ERRORS TO DETRACT FROM THE MESSAGE, EXHIBITS POOR STRUCTURE, HAS MANY SPELLING, GRAMMATICAL AND SYNTAX ERRORS, OR IRREGULARLY ADHERES TO APA FORMAT REQUIREMENTS.
FACULTY COMMENTS:“
WORK WITH THE WRITING CENTER TO ADDRESS THE COLLOQUIAL NATURE OF YOUR WRITING. I HAVE INDICATED AN EXAMPLE OF MY CONCERN IN YOUR DOCUMENT. THE WRITING CENTER WILL ALSO BE ABLE TO HELP YOU STRENGTHEN YOUR SKILL IN WRITING AN ANALYSIS.
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COMMUNICATES IN A MANNER THAT IS PROFESSIONAL AND CONSISTENT WITH EXPECTATIONS FOR MEMBERS OF THE BUSINESS PROFESSION.
FACULTY COMMENTS:“
PROVIDE ADDITIONAL DETAIL AND CLARITY. MAKE US OF SCHOLARLY AND PROFESSIONAL SOURCES.
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ASSIGNMENT:
Conduct research on how for-profit and nonprofit health care systems acquire capital and make investment decisions. Refer to the readings in the Resources, and gather other professional or scholarly resources. The library guide for this course (linked in the Resources) is a recommended starting point.
Write a paper (a minimum of 4 pages in length) that addresses the following:
Cite at least 4 scholarly or professional articles to support your statements. Include a reference list at the end of the paper, using APA style.