Notes from instructor below

thank you for submitting your rough draft. This is a good start! I do have a few suggestions to help guide your revision process.

First, I think more of an argument needs to be established here. You have a lot of information here about human trafficking, but your actual purpose behind your essay is unclear. What is it that you are trying to say and accomplish with this essay? Remember that this essay isn’t meant to inform, but instead to argue and accomplish a specific goal.

Second, work on differentiating between your words and the words/ideas of your sources through attribution, quoting, and citation.

Third, make sure to transition between points! Always tie in your paragraphs and points to the overall thesis you are trying to drive home.

Finally, carefully proofread! I recommend reading writing out loud and listening for sentences and phrases that don’t quite sound right. Chances are, those are the ones that need to be fixed.

I look forward to reading your revisions!

W8 Assignment

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