Hello , I want help on my research , I did the research but their are a lot of mistakes in it and the professor wrote it on the paper, I want the the mistakes to be fixed and the research paper I wanted to be 5 pages and I wrote only three please add more information and keep the same thesis statement and used the same thesis for all the research. and don’t remove the qoutation ( keep the same information and put more from academic resorce) please see the file below there is instraction and I put my research down below.
thank you