Modify the paper proposal in the attachment.
The focus of the paper proposal is placed on the American muscle car, and the webpage is just a display platform.
Professor’s comment:
You use the term “Muscle” in describing particular cars. This term needs to be defined better to hone in on your target audience or to inform a general audience what this term implies. A lot of your paper is focusing on the importance of creating a “well-designed website” for commerce purposes. What is your true theme for this thesis project? I am sensing that it may be “a well-designed website can assure that “any” product (muscle cars) will gain more exposure and be more beneficial.” I like your proposal. Please think about what I am asking. Having a Working thesis statement is important to support an idea. So what is your thesis statement? What will your research be about? What you are going to do as a project is clear, why you are doing it not so clear. Think about it. May need to add to this proposal in order to move to Assignment 2.